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Can you find the mistakes ?
Can you make it to nicer English ?

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just ask BRUCELAOMAN,HE WILL KINDLY CORRECT IT..

-- Edited by khonthakek on Friday 1st of May 2009 01:55:17 AM

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Anonymous

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ILLEGA, it only missed "L",  that's all.

I don't see anything that's not nice in this notice.



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Anonymous

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"L" at the end, should be "ILLEGAL"

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Anonymous

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EMBEZZLEMENT. NOT EMBEZZLEMEMT.

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BruceLaoMan

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Umm! It is just too wordy otherwise. Khonthakhek is right.  I don’t mind to make some revision for you though yours is understandable English but not up to the Standard English.  I will give it a try and see below if you like it.

Exchange of foreign currency outside the bank is illegal.

To avoid counterfeit, embezzlement and fraudulent activity, please conduct any financial transactions inside the bank.

Violators will be considered in the breach of the law.


 



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khonthakek

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For your safety, exchange your money at the bank so as to avoid the cheaters, embezzlers, and counterfeiters.





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Anonymous

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BruceLaoMan wrote:

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Can you find the mistakes ?
Can you make it to nicer English ?

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Umm! It is just too wordy otherwise. Khonthakhek is right.  I don’t mind to make some revision for you though yours is understandable English but not up to the Standard English.  I will give it a try and see below if you like it.

Exchange of foreign currency outside the bank is illegal.

To avoid counterfeit, embezzlement and fraudulent activity, please conduct any financial transactions inside the bank.

Violators will be considered in the breach of the law.


 



It sounds great...I like it.
You're the best, BLM!!!!

 



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Anonymous

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Poor BLM, he enjoyed it. I hope he's happy now.

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Anonymous

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Can you find the mistakes ?
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i don't see anything wrong is easy , if someone living in usa or canada england australia etc... they can correct it easy, is same in laos language......

 



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Anonymous

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In order to transact your financial business legally, you must conduct it through the banks, not with the black markets.

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Breach  is not right word to use.

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Foreing is not money.

 



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Embezzlement means what? and deem means what?

 



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You don't cheat ,and you don't breach a contract . You break the federal law. Jail time maybe 50 yrs.  When I am a bad guy, do you think I care for my safety? Man, drug only to make me happy.

 



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BLM did a perfect job.  It amaze me how they could put up a sign like this without making sure to have someone to with good English to check it.



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BLM did a perfect job.  It amaze me how they could put up a sign like this without making sure to have someone to with good English to check it.

 



yoou can blame them as you can sahai.

 



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I cheated on my spouse. I didn't know that I was violating a law. I thought I was unfaithful.

 



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BLM did a perfect job.  It amaze me how they could put up a sign like this without making sure to have someone to with good English to check it.

 



yoou can blame them as you can sahai.

 






ok sahai...hahaha commie in the house

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Joe Manila

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Yes!

Use Banks and Government Authorized Foreign Exchange Dealers Only. 



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Exchange your foreign currencies ONLY with the banks or government authorized foreign exchange dealers to avoid counterfeit money and fraudalent activities.

Anyone caught making illegal transactions will be penalized in accordance to the law.

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It is mandated that all exchanges of foreign currency be conducted within the banks.
Any form exchange other than posted would be considered illegal and violators would be subject to penalization in accordance to the law.


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