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Guest house rules in Luang prabang !

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All Lao grammar checkers, please correct this notice



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Hahahhahahahhah I'm not gonna even try to correct those sentences.  I'll leave it for my bro BLM, he is good with these type of stuffs.

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i am not good at correcting the english, but after I read and found out that there are ---------------------- lots of mistakes, 555555

yeah, ai BLM  try to correct those sentences plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

-- Edited by khonthakek on Tuesday 12th of May 2009 06:01:07 AM

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Guest house rules in Luang prabang !

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All Lao grammar checkers, please correct this notice



Good Lord! These are the rules in Lao Hotels and they are still in business?

I will give it a try and I only assumed that I understand what you intended to say.

I don’t really know what you meant by “Cooperation with you to a search” but if I may guess, you might want to say, “Please be cooperative during a body search” for security reason.

We are not responsible for any lost or stolen items of your belongings.

Illegal substance including hazardous materials are not allowed anywhere in the premise.

No Smoking in the room.

Please do not wash your clothes in the shower.

Please show courtesy to others by keeping your voice down.

Please do not remove or install anything without prior approval from a hotel manager.

Please do not post any explicit or porno pictures on the wall or anywhere in the area without permission.

No gamble, no illegal trade, or drugs are allowed.

No sexual contact or any political activity during your stay.

No visiting hours allowed in the bedroom among the guests.  Please meet in the conference room.

No service available after 23 30 PM and the checkout time is 12:00 noon.

 

 Rule number 12. Please have Laotian babes greet BLM upon his arrival at the earliest convenience. Late night female visitors are always welcome.

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Thanks bro BLM,
Very nice english indeed aww



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Anonymous wrote:

Thanks bro BLM,
Very nice english indeed aww



Always my pleasure.

Regards,smilefsu.gif

 



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holy **** bad grammar hahaha!
i dont think i could even try to fix it
my head is already hurting trying to read it

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Good job bro BLM!!!

But, you completely finish translating rule no. 4.  What I want to know is...  what the hell is intercourse shuffle??  are they talking about DILDO??confuse hahahhahahahha

-- Edited by SeeHarHed on Tuesday 12th of May 2009 04:34:06 PM

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it's perfect as is! confuse
i love it.

lao-english grammar.
please no translation needed. confuse
i like the way it is written. it's funny but it is more fun. haha. confuse

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hahahahhahahahhaahahahahahahahhaha  "intercourse shuffle"  hahahahahahhahahahahahahahhahhahhahahhahahhahahhahha



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