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Umm! It is just too wordy otherwise. Khonthakhek is right.I don’t mind to make some revision for you though yours is understandable English but not up to the Standard English. I will give it a try and see below if you like it.
Exchange of foreign currency outside the bank is illegal.
To avoid counterfeit, embezzlement and fraudulent activity, please conduct any financial transactions inside the bank.
Violators will be considered in the breach of the law.
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Umm! It is just too wordy otherwise. Khonthakhek is right.I don’t mind to make some revision for you though yours is understandable English but not up to the Standard English. I will give it a try and see below if you like it.
Exchange of foreign currency outside the bank is illegal.
To avoid counterfeit, embezzlement and fraudulent activity, please conduct any financial transactions inside the bank.
Violators will be considered in the breach of the law.
It sounds great...I like it. You're the best, BLM!!!!
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i don't see anything wrong is easy , if someone living in usa or canada england australia etc... they can correct it easy, is same in laos language......
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You don't cheat ,and you don't breach a contract . You break the federal law. Jail time maybe 50 yrs. When I am a bad guy, do you think I care for my safety? Man, drug only to make me happy.
Exchange your foreign currencies ONLY with the banks or government authorized foreign exchange dealers to avoid counterfeit money and fraudalent activities.
Anyone caught making illegal transactions will be penalized in accordance to the law.
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It is mandated that all exchanges of foreign currency be conducted within the banks. Any form exchange other than posted would be considered illegal and violators would be subject to penalization in accordance to the law.
